RESUME REVIEW
Appearance & Classification
- If you write your phone numbers side by side and separate with a slash; your contact information part can seem more aesthetic. Leave one more space after your name in your resume.
- You can make left and right margins a bit. You have aligned the text on left too much. Upper and bottom margin has also got this problem.
- Avoid leaving big spaces and leave one line space after the headlines.
- Instead of numbering, use other marks to order. You can use more indent in your subheadings.
- While ordering, use the same marks for the same duties.
Functional
- You had better the the “Work experience” part right after “Career Objective” part.
Grammar
There are no grammatical mistakes in your resume.
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ORIGINAL RESUME
AHMED HOSNI AHMED
13 Mohamed Omran, Ain Shams
Cairo, Egypt
(02) 22953421
(0100) 6115201
(010)20108010
[email protected]
Career Objectives:
Seeking a challenging position in a reputable company where my academic background and interpersonal skills are well developed and utilized.
Educational Qualifications:
2007: Bachelor of Commerce
University:Ain Shams University
Faculty:Commerce
Major:Accounting
Graduation grade:Fair
2003: high school degree Thanawia Amma
Skills Profile:
1-Interpersonal Skills:
- Ability to work individually and as co-operative team member.
- Ability to work for long time.
- Able to work under stress.
- Dynamic and ambitious.
- Nonsmoker.
- Not aggressive
2-Language Skills:
English:Good command of both written and spoken
Arabic:Native Language.
3-Computer and Network Skills:
- Computer basic skill
- Excellent knowledge of Win XP
- Very good knowledge of Excel & Word.
- Good knowledge of M.S Office & Internet
Courses:
- Win, Excel Course 22/9/2007 to 6/10/2007
Oct 09 – Jan 10 Basic Business Skills Acquisition (BBSA) Cairo, Egypt
Sponsored by the Future Generation Foundation (FGF)
- Developed Language and Computer skills.
- Enhanced Presentation & Project Development skills.
- Acquired basic business skills including: marketing, sales, banking, accounting, business correspondence and report writing.
- Computerized Accounting (Peachtree)
Training at Intel Intel products” April 2011
Work Experience:
- RadioShack & Computershop Co. Cairo, Egypt (current job)
I”m working as a sales maker at showroom
- AL_ADGHAM CO. Cairo, Egypt (7/2006 – 12/2009)
I worked as a junior accountant (Responsible for cash handling & banking transactions)
I worked as a salesman & marketer indoor (Calling customers, explaining our products and services, invite them to visit our company, website and exhibitions)
I worked as a customer service agent.
- GREEN DREAMS CO. For Landscape & External Decoration Cairo, Egypt (7/2008 12/2008)
I worked as a junior accountant (Responsible for cash handling & banking transactions)
I worked as a customer service agent.
- I arranged & attended two exhibitions at (le Marché 2008 & Hotex 2009, 2010) as a salesman and an accountant.
Personal information:
Nationality: Egyptian.
Gender: Male.
Date of birth: 16TH September 1985.
Martial status: Single.
Military status: Exemption.
Interests and Activities:
Surfing Internet
Writing.
Jogging & playing football.