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Original Application Letter
Human Resource Department
I am hereby applying for a job at your reputable organization. I have recently completed upper sixth form and my CAPE subjects at the Old Harbour High School. I was also involved in the Old Harbour High School’s Debating Society where I was exposed to different aspects of writing and analysing materials. I am a first year Pure and Applied student at The University of West Indies. I have an excellent command in English.
I am very vibrant and hard-working. I have experience in working with customers on a daily basis as a Customer Relations Representative at Courts Jamaica Limited and also as a Telemarketer/Educational Advisor at Fullgram Solutions. My Curriculum Vitae along with the references are attached.